I got some pretty useful feedback yesterday in class. The first advice I was given was to create an introduction to my topic. I need to make some kind of pre-information that states my thesis, and sets up what I will be talking about.
Next, I need to discuss why I chose the certain disorders that I did. I will put in my paper reasons such as: these are the most common disorders that teachers see in a classroom, and disorders that I can give good specific strategies to help the students.
Most importantly is to get more sources. I only have about one or two sources for each disorder I discuss. I need to get information from different sources. I plan to get this information from scholarly articles, and possibly more books.
Some feedback that was positive is that my paper flowed well, and that I have a lot of detailed information that makes sense, and works well together.
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